• Anthony Mallgren
    • NY, US
    • Joined in July 2013
  • 9/20/2013 11:56:42 PM
    Hints of subtleties and nuances within fluidity create a juxtaposition of merry-go-round demonstrations of skill in intellectual substance, culture trends, natural ... Show More
    (6 chapter reviews) | 1017 +Votes
    Psychic bartender meets hero cop. Spiritual apocalypse. Urban dwelling versus ecovillaging. Sexual healing. Downwardly, ... More Info
  • 8/6/2013 12:45:07 AM
    Story flows smoothly, enough hidden Easter Eggs and Gems to hold those whom consider New York to be dear to them and a story line that seems like more truth is portrayed ... Show More
    (22 chapter reviews) | 5132 +Votes
    This serial is unlike any you've ever read: a serio-comic mashup of history, fantasy, gumshoe, and steampunk wrapped in ... More Info
  • 8/6/2013 12:39:44 AM
    I think you have a typo, near the end, in the line: I knew that I would need all of [my] strength for the coming day, when I will harpoon the belly of this white whale ... Show More
    (22 chapter reviews) | 5132 +Votes
    This serial is unlike any you've ever read: a serio-comic mashup of history, fantasy, gumshoe, and steampunk wrapped in ... More Info
    • C. A. Sanders Thanks! Early on in the series there are a ton of typos (i have spellcheck and grammar check, but nothing beats a keen eye). My favorite is where I refer to a "wonton woman." When they were written, there was no editing feature once an installment was posted.
      8/6/2013 4:09:22 PM
    • Anthony Mallgren I just ran into this with respacing my story after posting this. Sometimes I'm just really smart/keen with my suggestions. I'll try to do better.
      8/6/2013 8:42:14 PM
    • C. A. Sanders The best advice I got was from a review on Web Fiction Guide, where the reviewer recommended that I get a second pair of eyes specifically for proofreading. I always have beta testers, but they sometimes miss those things too.
      8/6/2013 9:59:14 PM
    • Anthony Mallgren Tried it. The resulting dilution from those that are accessible to me isn't worth the few spelling corrections. Perhaps you have a more savvy and capable network than I.
      8/9/2013 2:28:42 AM
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