• Katie DiCarlo
    • NV, US
    • Joined in June 2013
  • 5/6/2016 7:18:34 PM
    Hello good day, i will like to meet you in person, am miss Anna, am from France and am leaving in London, please contact me on my email id at (annh1brown@hotmail.com), ... Show More
  • 8/13/2013 4:34:04 PM
    I love your careful use of detail. Very masterful, how each action has a description but I don’t feel weighed down by it. Your plot is interesting, I’m engaged and this ... Show More
    (10 chapter reviews) | 1185 +Votes
    The Conclave, home of the mysterious Adepts, has ruled Corinas with an iron grip for generations. But now, a resurgent ... More Info
    Genres:
    Fantasy
    • Anonymous My name is Miss Dominika i saw your profile now and pick interest as friend to share important discussion with you so contact me my email (dominikaenos15@hotmail.com) or send me your own email for picture and other discussion ok
      3/28/2015 6:03:18 PM
  • Katie DiCarlo commented on Chapter 1 :
    8/13/2013 4:45:23 PM
    Your story is so far all that the reviewers say that it is. I’ll point out a few things (though I noticed more, but I don’t go through everything unless the author wants ... Show More
    (4 chapter reviews) | 1779 +Votes
    BOOK ONE: Faith McCain is used to having no magic in a world where it is of the utmost importance. However when two ... More Info
    • Catherine Kovach Oh man, thank you for reading! Unfortunately Anomalies is currently super unpolished at the moment, so if you have any notes like that, absolutely suggest an edit! It's hard to catch anything and any eyes are appreciated.
      8/13/2013 4:48:27 PM
    • Katie DiCarlo You got it dear. :) I'll go submit for an edit so I don't clutter up your comment section. :)
      8/13/2013 4:51:17 PM
    • Catherine Kovach Thank you! I really appreciate it, I know that there's some work that needs doing on this, but I'm glad that the bones of the story has entertained people!
      8/13/2013 4:52:37 PM
  • 8/13/2013 3:56:15 PM
    I love the voice of your main character. It’s so real, I’ve met people with parts of her, with her opinions, and I think it’s great. Really all your characters feel like ... Show More
    (8 chapter reviews) | 2029 +Votes
    They’re young, talented, and just trying to make it. Ayanna and her roomates Max and Leah are all twenty-somethings ... More Info
  • 8/5/2013 6:42:44 PM
    Your main character’s name is amazing! Ha. You may want to break up your first paragraph into a few more sentences, but that’s really a stylistic choice. And some of your ... Show More
    (1 chapter reviews) | 27 +Votes
    Pwela Xore is the top analyst at her legal firm, accustomed to doing the busywork to make her employers look good. ... More Info
  • 8/5/2013 6:34:49 PM
    I can’t say I got drawn into this one. The first couple paragraphs are a little rough to read, not from the gore but just because they are a little awkwardly worded. I do ... Show More
    (1 chapter reviews) | 67 +Votes
    When the Deep Purple Falls is a story about a hit man who has lost his girlfriend, his job and soon, maybe, his life. ... More Info
    Genres:
    Thriller
  • 8/5/2013 6:25:56 PM
    The good is that your story has a strong enough voice to carry a reader through your chapter. The bad is that your writing is a little rough, particularly in the ... Show More
    (1 chapter reviews) | 22 +Votes
    Cohen has two good friends, one of which is now dead. In fact, people are dying around Cohen quite frequently lately, ... More Info
    Genres:
    Horror, Paranormal
  • 8/5/2013 6:18:21 PM
    This sentence in the intro is a bit rough, in that I’m not entirely sure what you are trying to convey. “His dreams infested with the stir of the dead still lining the ... Show More
    (272 chapter reviews) | 7249 +Votes
    A brutal new virus emerged from seemingly everywhere at the same time and eradicated the human population to almost ... More Info
  • 8/5/2013 6:06:48 PM
    I was hooked from the first sentence. I love the ocean, and so I’m definitely looking forward to giving this piece a chance. Something I noticed with your writing is you ... Show More
    (1 chapter reviews) | 11 +Votes
    In 1930's Italy, the town of Torne is enjoying a tenuous peace. The main strength of the town comes from two families: ... More Info
  • 7/30/2013 4:11:34 PM
    You may have forgotten a word, perhaps, “You after that crazy girl WHO lives”? "So why would you want to go there? You after that crazy girl lives there?" That’s the ... Show More
    (22 chapter reviews) | 2318 +Votes
    Twenty years ago, the world changed. No one knows exactly what happened – one day, the sky burned and civilization fell. ... More Info
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