• Kelly J. Ferry
    • Joined in May 2013
  • Debra-Lynn Hook commented on Chapter 1 :
    7/1/2013 6:59:28 AM
    "Truth is, I'm too curious to die." Truth is, I'm too curious not to read this. Stunning stuff, my friend. Awesome story line. Awesome turns of phrase. I generally don't ... Show More
    (5 chapter reviews) | 303 +Votes
    When a superbug wipes out the entire population of Earth, Nebula Award-winning author Tessa Bloom is much to her ... More Info
    Genres:
    Dystopian
    • Kelly J. Ferry Thank you for reading and commenting - as I go along, I hope you will feel comfortable telling me what you think doesn't work!
      7/1/2013 7:37:31 AM
    • Lynn Embley My favorite Genres. You story has a refreshingly unique twist...a female point of view with a slightly bent mind as she deals with the the aloneness and surprises. I couldn't stop reading and can't wait for the rest of the story!
      11/18/2014 12:38:26 PM
  • Kelly J. Ferry commented on Chapter 3 :
    7/5/2013 1:36:00 PM
    I love how this chapter reflects the first chapter so perfectly!
    (2 chapter reviews) | 1714 +Votes
    Anastasie Eloise Bertrand has spent the better part of fifteen years in a state mental hospital convinced that she is ... More Info
  • Kelly J. Ferry commented on Chapter 1 :
    7/4/2013 12:11:04 PM
    Wow, what a thrill ride of a first chapter - so much tension building from beginning to end. Ana's self-confidence mixed with anxiety is the perfect cocktail to create ... Show More
    (2 chapter reviews) | 1714 +Votes
    Anastasie Eloise Bertrand has spent the better part of fifteen years in a state mental hospital convinced that she is ... More Info
  • Kelly J. Ferry commented on Chapter 4 :
    6/28/2013 1:31:41 PM
    Ooof, I love the first paragraph - every word. So many powerful images in this chapter, too!
    (6 chapter reviews) | 1017 +Votes
    Psychic bartender meets hero cop. Spiritual apocalypse. Urban dwelling versus ecovillaging. Sexual healing. Downwardly, ... More Info
    • Kaye Soleil how to show time passage and keep it amusing :) i really have decided that this is the way i want to go with writing: keep asking myself: dahlink, does this amuuuuuuse you?? :)
      6/28/2013 2:12:29 PM
  • Kelly J. Ferry commented on Chapter 3 :
    6/28/2013 1:23:40 PM
    Katana sword! Woot woot!
    (6 chapter reviews) | 1017 +Votes
    Psychic bartender meets hero cop. Spiritual apocalypse. Urban dwelling versus ecovillaging. Sexual healing. Downwardly, ... More Info
  • Kelly J. Ferry commented on Chapter 1 :
    6/27/2013 7:28:41 AM
    I really enjoyed this opener - am fascinated by people who feel the need to climb such heights, and look forward to seeing how you play it out in this story.
    (3 chapter reviews) | 1007 +Votes
    Tristan Farr is not a field agent and is no longer a climber, so why would her boss at the agency send her to Peru to ... More Info
  • Kelly J. Ferry commented on Chapter 3 :
    6/26/2013 9:59:03 AM
    I'm enjoying your story - looking forward to reading more!
    774 +Votes
    Edie Strake is struggling to preserve her parents' dream of Ironwood, a once thriving commune now on its last breath. ... More Info
  • Aden Ng commented on Chapter 2 :
    6/26/2013 8:54:37 AM
    Another attention grabbing chapter. Keep up the good work!
    (5 chapter reviews) | 303 +Votes
    When a superbug wipes out the entire population of Earth, Nebula Award-winning author Tessa Bloom is much to her ... More Info
    Genres:
    Dystopian
    • Kelly J. Ferry Thanks, Aden. It's been an interesting process to take my draft and break it into solid chapters that I hope can stand alone and keep the reader's interest enough that they want to come back for the next one. Editing is definitely my favorite part.
      6/26/2013 9:10:09 AM
  • W.G. Sells commented on Chapter 1 :
    6/26/2013 5:15:21 AM
    Good opener! Apocalypse is fun to write :-) Please chop up your big paragraphs into chewable bits. It makes for an easier experience. Keep it going!
    (5 chapter reviews) | 303 +Votes
    When a superbug wipes out the entire population of Earth, Nebula Award-winning author Tessa Bloom is much to her ... More Info
    Genres:
    Dystopian
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