• Yashita Ghazi
    • AK, US
    • Joined in May 2017
  • Yashita Ghazi commented on Chapter 1 :
    5/30/2017 1:17:01 PM
    i am miss yashita ghazi i have a proposal for you via at (yashitaghazi11@gmail.com)
    8 +Votes
    The ongoing saga of an incomplete wanker.
    • Thomas Corfield Yes, hello again, Miss Ghazi. I fear we have been through this once already via one of my other stories. As I have said previously, unless you're prepared to concentrate on your capital letter usage and basic punctuation, I am not interested in any of your proposals, unless they are particularly indecent. In which case, punctuation isn't really going to come into it. Nevertheless, I must say i am disheartened by your audacity in presenting yourself word-for-word as you have before, with no attempt at taking my advice, even though it bordered on copy editing. I am uncertain whether you have an extraordinary sense of humor or are severely mentally retarded - though the two are not necessarily mutually exclusive, as my mother found out during my sixth birthday when I set fire to my genitalia with a candle in an effort to impress everyone. Bearing that in mind, we may get on famously, especially if your offer is genuinely indecent.
      5/31/2017 12:18:26 AM
  • 5/30/2017 10:53:31 PM
    i am miss yashita ghazi i have a proposal for you via at (yashitaghazi11@gmail.com)
  • 5/30/2017 10:50:58 PM
    i am miss yashita ghazi i have a proposal for you via at (yashitaghazi11@gmail.com)
  • 5/30/2017 10:50:51 PM
    i am miss yashita ghazi i have a proposal for you via at (yashitaghazi11@gmail.com)
  • Eric commented on Chapter 1 :
    4/18/2014 3:39:57 AM
    This was a very well done chapter! Very much enjoyed everything, wow, the girl, the gunshot, going through dying, the descriptions were so well done. I came here because ... Show More
    (5 chapter reviews) | 287 +Votes
    Heir to a legacy he never imagined, hunted by an enemy he cannot see, one boy’s only hope for survival rests between a ... More Info
    • Joey Cruz Hey, thanks so much for the kind words, Dustin! It is my pleasure to keep you guessing. :) I'll have to thank K.R. for sending you my way. (Daggers is awesome, isn't it?!)
      4/18/2014 5:53:41 AM
    • Eric Haha yes! Daggers is epic!
      4/18/2014 2:29:28 PM
    • Yashita Ghazi i am miss yashita ghazi i have a proposal for you via at (yashitaghazi11@gmail.com)
      5/30/2017 10:50:36 PM
  • 5/30/2017 10:49:51 PM
    i am miss yashita ghazi i have a proposal for you via at (yashitaghazi11@gmail.com)
  • 5/30/2017 10:49:00 PM
    i am miss yashita ghazi i have a proposal for you via at (yashitaghazi11@gmail.com)
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