• Katrina Thornley
    • Exeter , RI, US
    • Joined in November 2016
  • The ability to live multiple times through writing as well as reading has got to be one of the most amazing parts of life, it creates a common thread through humanity ... Show More
  • Andre Clemons commented on Chapter 1 :
    12/16/2016 3:10:23 AM
    Aiden' s narrative voice has already grabbed my attention. Raw and blunt right off the bat...
    34 +Votes
    Aiden, Lydia, Caleb, and Sunshine are four vastly different teenagers that are forced to work as a group in their high ... More Info
    • Katrina Thornley Thank you! I'm glad his story has interested you
      12/16/2016 5:24:23 PM
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      6/1/2017 2:09:36 PM
  • Becky M commented on Chapter 9 :
    1/22/2017 5:15:53 AM
    Wow. We're going deeper here. I can really feel Aiden's frustration, because nothing he does is right. I'm really enjoying your story so far. The characters are all ... Show More
    34 +Votes
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    • Katrina Thornley I read to escape and I write to try and provide the same opportunity for others. Thank you so much for your feedback!
      2/27/2017 5:50:09 PM
  • 2/27/2017 2:35:44 PM
    34 +Votes
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  • 1/17/2017 8:54:21 PM
    34 +Votes
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  • 1/11/2017 5:28:13 PM
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  • 12/29/2016 10:33:32 PM
    The detail you used in the beginning instantly hooked me, really great opening.
    6 +Votes
    She almost died. Then he showed up. Supernatural rom-com, heavy on the sarcasm & messed up folk. In the near ... More Info
    • KAIE . Thanks! The opening kind of just came to me, so it's been an interesting challenge trying to carry the story through in the same tone!
      12/29/2016 10:43:11 PM
    • Katrina Thornley It's always interesting following a story! I try not to plan mine out too much and just see where they go :) i look forward to reading more of yours
      12/29/2016 10:46:48 PM
    • KAIE . I'll have to give it a read - always interested to see how that goes for people! I also prefer to write more organically (this serial is a week-by-week too), but I'm working on a separate novel with my editor right now, and REALLY wish I'd just done it off of a plan in the first place... it would have saved so much pain! I love the free-form, subconscious artistry of unplanned work, but my storytelling and pacing tends to suffer for it, lol. Still, that's what editors and rewrites are for! All the best with your serial :)
      12/29/2016 10:53:05 PM
  • Wyatt Somby commented on Chapter 2 :
    12/14/2016 2:37:40 AM
    Well done.
    34 +Votes
    Aiden, Lydia, Caleb, and Sunshine are four vastly different teenagers that are forced to work as a group in their high ... More Info
  • 12/13/2016 3:00:06 PM
    I feel for Lydia--even though she gave up a nice guy for a jerk.
    34 +Votes
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    • Katrina Thornley Thank you! I'm glad connections are being made
      12/29/2016 10:36:58 PM
  • Becky M commented on Chapter 2 :
    12/12/2016 5:43:15 AM
    That was another powerful chapter, keep up the good work. Is she really showing so much that she can't see her feet at 5 months? That seems a little soon, especially for ... Show More
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    • Katrina Thornley Thank you, I'll try to rethink the time in the next revision!
      12/29/2016 10:36:15 PM
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