• ela leo
    • Park City, UT, US
    • Joined in May 2016
  • From Orange County in the '80s, of a large all-girl family, our father (a doctor) used to wake the house Sunday mornings by blasting Mormon Tabernacle Choir over the ... Show More
  • ela leo wants more of The Gentlemen
    1/6/2017 2:24:54 AM
    31 +Votes
    There is a place that is only spoken of in whispers, a place where secrets are kept, a place where dreams can come true, ... More Info
    • Andre Clemons Wait no more! Chapter 6 of THE GENTLEMEN is now posted!! Enjoy!! :)
      1/8/2017 1:23:15 AM
  • 10/15/2016 2:33:33 PM
    Ugh, poor Janine! That part with her leg... *shudder*. I can't wait for the next chapter though!
    51 +Votes
    THE SEQUEL TO THE 2016 JUKEPOP SUMMER WRITING PROJECT TOP-25 RANKED SERIAL THE LAKE GIANTS!! Skylar Green is back, and ... More Info
    • Andre Clemons Yeah, I had to kick off this sequel with an opening that was creepier than Annie Lee, so I thought of this. I'm glad that it was creepy enough, and the Spider King is going to be a very intimidating presence within this first story arc. Next chapter, we'll check in on what life is like for "totally normal girl" Skylar Green and Lexi...
      10/15/2016 4:38:00 PM
    • ela leo Super fun! A fresh pounce amid allusions to familiar stories, skylar green & mouse on the mic-- delightful comfort before the horror. Great start!
      1/6/2017 4:41:13 AM
  • ela leo commented on Chapter 5 :
    1/6/2017 2:24:06 AM
    Just in this brief introduction, each character seems real. Their separate coping skills, their reactions & their choices each seem authentic. The line, ...numb. ....not ... Show More
    31 +Votes
    There is a place that is only spoken of in whispers, a place where secrets are kept, a place where dreams can come true, ... More Info
  • Andre Clemons commented on Chapter 64 :
    1/5/2017 2:51:45 AM
    Ah, and here we come to the end! It was an incredible literary run and I've enjoyed it every step of the way! Thank you for the experience! With these, as you told me, ... Show More
    170 +Votes
    Bibi Valkyrie, (a Lucille Bluth/Mallory Archer type) mother of teenage celebrity reveals the making of a supernatural ... More Info
    • ela leo Thanks so much for reading to the end, and for sharing your thoughts so generously. I think Bibi is learning her universe is expanding endlessly. It seems her point of view may incarnate another character whose thread will weave dimension into the story of her immortality.
      1/5/2017 4:18:40 AM
  • Andre Clemons commented on Chapter 63 :
    1/5/2017 2:42:53 AM
    Wow, talk about a finale, with all the incredibly gritty and graphic action attached!!
    170 +Votes
    Bibi Valkyrie, (a Lucille Bluth/Mallory Archer type) mother of teenage celebrity reveals the making of a supernatural ... More Info
    • ela leo So glad you enjoyed it!
      1/5/2017 4:03:59 AM
  • Andre Clemons commented on Chapter 62 :
    1/5/2017 2:41:36 AM
    Okay, now here I am, wishing Trojan War was a real show...preferably on Netflix.
    170 +Votes
    Bibi Valkyrie, (a Lucille Bluth/Mallory Archer type) mother of teenage celebrity reveals the making of a supernatural ... More Info
  • Andre Clemons commented on Chapter 61 :
    1/5/2017 2:40:45 AM
    One of my favorite things in this serial are the relationships and how, through the characterization but especially with the dialogue, you make them feel so genuine on the page.
    170 +Votes
    Bibi Valkyrie, (a Lucille Bluth/Mallory Archer type) mother of teenage celebrity reveals the making of a supernatural ... More Info
    • ela leo I really appreciate that. I wondered whether the co conversation was too distant, telling not showing. Thank you for your encouragement.
      1/5/2017 3:49:13 AM
  • Andre Clemons commented on Chapter 59 :
    1/5/2017 2:26:52 AM
    It can be a challenge to have an extended conversation between multiple characters and keep it interesting and to keep all the voices consistent but it's a skill that ... Show More
    170 +Votes
    Bibi Valkyrie, (a Lucille Bluth/Mallory Archer type) mother of teenage celebrity reveals the making of a supernatural ... More Info
    • ela leo Thanks so much, so glad!
      1/5/2017 3:37:18 AM
  • Andre Clemons commented on Chapter 57 :
    12/16/2016 3:19:18 AM
    Oh, why would you trust Achilles?
    170 +Votes
    Bibi Valkyrie, (a Lucille Bluth/Mallory Archer type) mother of teenage celebrity reveals the making of a supernatural ... More Info
    • ela leo You may have more sense than they do :-) Thanks for reading! I've published the final chapters. Bibi's view comes to a close. Hope you will keep sharing your thoughts though the conclusion!
      12/16/2016 3:55:17 AM
  • Andre Clemons commented on Chapter 56 :
    12/16/2016 3:17:51 AM
    Kind of rough to see her go through that in the beginning, but I'm still concerned for her son...
    170 +Votes
    Bibi Valkyrie, (a Lucille Bluth/Mallory Archer type) mother of teenage celebrity reveals the making of a supernatural ... More Info
    • ela leo Tough positions to be in, yes. As always, thanks for your comments!
      12/16/2016 3:48:37 AM
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