• Oren Hammerquist
    • APO, AE, US
    • Joined in March 2016
  • I have been writing semi-professionally for about three years. I self-published my first novel "Murphy's Second Death" and used a small publishing house for my second ... Show More
  • 8/27/2016 10:53:02 AM
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    Vigo Rask is the world's first supervillain, but his reign of terror comes to a sudden end when mild-mannered Edmund ... More Info
    Genres:
    Comedy, Sci Fi, Superhero
  • 8/15/2016 6:48:27 AM
    10 +Votes
    Vigo Rask is the world's first supervillain, but his reign of terror comes to a sudden end when mild-mannered Edmund ... More Info
    Genres:
    Comedy, Sci Fi, Superhero
  • Oren Hammerquist started a new story.
    8/4/2016 12:36:10 PM
    10 +Votes
    Vigo Rask is the world's first supervillain, but his reign of terror comes to a sudden end when mild-mannered Edmund ... More Info
    Genres:
    Comedy, Sci Fi, Superhero
  • 3/12/2016 8:34:29 PM
    What I like here is that you present an unusual world with no apologies and little exposition. Too often, writers feel the need to explain everything right off. You trust your readers.
    681 +Votes
    That weekend, all Beth Hargreaves wanted was to paint her kitchen, but all she got was nearly killed, thanks to a ... More Info
    • TP Keating To be honest, once the characters were set up, they began to lead me through the story. It's a unique experience, I must admit.
      3/13/2016 9:00:57 AM
    • Jerry Fan It's always a treat to see a character lead story in development :)
      5/4/2016 9:30:38 PM
    • ANN brown Hello good day, i will like to meet you in person, am miss Anna, am from France and am leaving in London, please contact me on my email id at (annh1brown@hotmail.com), for more information about me. because i have some important thing i will like to discuss with you privately. Hope to hear from you soon. Anna, thanks
      5/5/2016 11:37:10 PM
  • 4/24/2016 11:57:28 AM
    32 +Votes
    Hindsight is beyond 20/20 for police investigator and psychic prodigy Nathan Wald. His gift (or curse) is to see the ... More Info
  • 4/16/2016 10:34:49 PM
    32 +Votes
    Hindsight is beyond 20/20 for police investigator and psychic prodigy Nathan Wald. His gift (or curse) is to see the ... More Info
  • 4/9/2016 4:13:26 PM
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    Hindsight is beyond 20/20 for police investigator and psychic prodigy Nathan Wald. His gift (or curse) is to see the ... More Info
  • Ryan Watt commented on Chapter 5 :
    4/3/2016 5:40:48 PM
    Even a psychic seems fallible to fallacy of normal senses during times of stress. That's good to know.
    32 +Votes
    Hindsight is beyond 20/20 for police investigator and psychic prodigy Nathan Wald. His gift (or curse) is to see the ... More Info
    • Oren Hammerquist Trying to set up a flawed character. Hope it is working.
      4/3/2016 6:57:23 PM
  • 4/2/2016 6:52:10 AM
    32 +Votes
    Hindsight is beyond 20/20 for police investigator and psychic prodigy Nathan Wald. His gift (or curse) is to see the ... More Info
  • Daniel Kilkelly commented on Chapter 1 :
    3/25/2016 1:51:36 AM
    I really liked the concept of the stars rippling and changing colors. That really piqued my curiosity. You also did well to build up tension with the non-disclosure ... Show More
    4 +Votes
    Man promised never again to destroy the planet beneath their feet by ripping metals from its skin; they should have ... More Info
    Genres:
    Other, Sci Fi
    • Oren Hammerquist Very good points, and you're right. You are getting rough draft here, and it is, without question, rough. I'll keep that in mind for the rewrite. You are absolutely correct, this needs more setting, less talking.
      4/2/2016 5:13:14 AM
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