• Steve Ahlquist
    • Providence, RI, US
    • Joined in June 2012
  • Eric Fretheim commented on Chapter 7 :
    2/6/2014 9:49:53 PM
    it's been a fun read so far, and I plan to read more. I am curious about the market you are writing for, however. The narrative style seems younger than the amount of ... Show More
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    Lizzie Clover is a plucky little match girl in Victorian London swept away on a dragon kite to an grand adventure in a ... More Info
    • Steve Ahlquist Thanks. When i write I usually don't worry about markets as much as creating a fun and original story. The story is a bit dark, but I like the contrast with the narrative style, which is much more in keeping with early twentieth century children's books, or at least that's what I'm going for. The next two chapters are very dark, but from there things will get better. We'll see what happens.
      2/6/2014 10:01:18 PM
  • Steve Ahlquist commented on Chapter 2 :
    8/28/2013 1:14:47 PM
    Launching a little early because I'll be away from my computer this September 1st, is Lizzie the Girl Knight Chapter 2 featuring: The Kites - The Storm - The Dragon - An ... Show More
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    Lizzie Clover is a plucky little match girl in Victorian London swept away on a dragon kite to an grand adventure in a ... More Info