• Bill Larsen
    • Durham, NC, US
    • Joined in June 2015
  • Bill Larsen commented on Chapter 1 :
    6/3/2015 1:21:21 PM
    Sci fi adventure is my lifeblood, and this is a great source of it!
    27 +Votes
    Transferring from the quiet of the Galactic Confederation to the farthest edges of known space, Ethan Hawke has jumped ... More Info
    Genres:
    Adventure, Sci Fi
    • Jonathan Snyder Thank you! Best compliment I've had!
      6/3/2015 4:54:32 PM
    • ANN brown Hello good day, i will like to meet you in person, am miss Anna, am from France and am leaving in London, please contact me on my email id at (annh1brown@hotmail.com), for more information about me. because i have some important thing i will like to discuss with you privately. Hope to hear from you soon. Anna, thanks
      5/6/2016 12:55:24 AM
  • 6/5/2015 1:42:17 PM
    I just checked out your site, you have an excellent creative mind!
    • J.A. Waters Oh hey, thank you! You are very kind to say so, I appreciate you checking out my work!
      6/5/2015 2:34:17 PM
  • Andre Clemons commented on Chapter 1 :
    6/5/2015 12:56:17 PM
    Well, when the men in dark suits come to your home, it's never for anything good. When will people learn? All in all, great opening! The time jump was surprising, but not ... Show More
    6 +Votes
    After a peaceful alien population cohabited the Earth for years with humans, they suddenly turn violent, eradicating ... More Info
    • Bill Larsen It never is! Great to hear! Surprising in a good way? (: haha. I'll be posting Chapter 2 today!
      6/5/2015 1:11:55 PM
  • J.A. Waters commented on Chapter 1 :
    6/5/2015 12:24:02 PM
    The Administration just has an ominous sound to it. I can't see them being a bright and happy organization with a name like that. That said, maybe they're okay and are ... Show More
    6 +Votes
    After a peaceful alien population cohabited the Earth for years with humans, they suddenly turn violent, eradicating ... More Info
    • Bill Larsen Hey, thank you so much for the kind words and feedback! It is of course welcome! In having a few friends read it, too, that's the most common thing brought up. That it's kind of an information dump. I appreciate it, and I'll see what I can do! (And yeah, I intend to do jumping back and forth between the past and present often.) Do you think it's better not included for more intrigue, or just included in a more... organic way?
      6/5/2015 12:36:41 PM
    • J.A. Waters I'd prefer a more organic way. I like how some movies do it, with televisions on in the background with newsclips or conversations between people about important political things going on. A little bit of intrigue can be good too, but that's just my opinion.
      6/5/2015 12:51:18 PM
  • 6/3/2015 7:37:54 PM
    (6 chapter reviews) | 2190 +Votes
    Billions of miles from the nearest habitable planet, the freighter ship Joanna Ng has been crippled. The only survivors ... More Info
  • Bill Larsen wants more of The Givers
    6/3/2015 5:47:44 PM
    6 +Votes
    After a peaceful alien population cohabited the Earth for years with humans, they suddenly turn violent, eradicating ... More Info
  • Bill Larsen commented on Chapter 1 :
    6/3/2015 1:20:25 PM
    Loads of fun, looking forward to see where this goes.
    (2 chapter reviews) | 4503 +Votes
    It starts with an explosion in the wilderness to the east of Seattle. Before anyone knows it, the temperature is 100 ... More Info
  • Bill Larsen commented on Chapter 1 :
    6/3/2015 12:40:50 PM
    Incredible! Only time to read the first chapter right now, but I can't wait to read more by the start of things. (:
    (1 chapter reviews) | 563 +Votes
    Completed on 20160516. Sidella Solston has decided to skip work for a couple of eons. In fact, while she's at it she ... More Info
    • J.A. Waters Thank you! It's a fun story to write and I hope you enjoy it. Welcome to JukePop by the way! Best of luck and I'll try giving your story a look soon as well.
      6/3/2015 12:49:07 PM
    • Bill Larsen Thank you very much! Seems to be a great community so far. (:
      6/3/2015 12:54:21 PM
  • Bill Larsen commented on Chapter 2 :
    6/3/2015 12:37:01 PM
    I'm intrigued, and like your style!
    Vivid Tactics by Emily Foley & Inspired by DTO
    6 +Votes
    A ship traveling to terraform and colonize a new world is struck by tragedy. The guilty party is unknown but suspicion ... More Info
  • Bill Larsen says:
    6/3/2015 12:24:37 PM
    Good morning! How is everyone doing today? (:
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