• Jennifer Flath
    • WA, US
    • Joined in February 2014
  • I'm just a person who'd like to be a writer and a Princess, obviously, with magical powers, preferably.
  • 6/28/2017 11:34:27 PM
    Oh, oh, did the mom die a long time ago, and she's just a projection of the Griffon? Or maybe the doctor is? I still want a griffon. Mine would be clever and adorable and not try to kill me.
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    • Ryan Watt Good idea, but the power to create illusions is tied to the Griffon King title, which Ol Rascal doesn't have... yet.
      6/29/2017 3:24:15 AM
  • 6/28/2017 11:27:00 PM
    I need a griffon. I would ride it around and it would love me and guard my house. It would conjure fake people to talk to salespeople at the door so I don't have to deal ... Show More
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    • Ryan Watt Sadly, not too many kind helpful griffons in this world, which is a shame cause you're right, they're totally awesome! As for Viktor, he was raised as a tool, long term thinking isn't really in his wheelhouse. Kind of like someone else on the team we know...
      6/29/2017 3:22:31 AM
  • 6/28/2017 11:35:25 PM
    Basically he would be Clifford, but cuter, and with handy magical powers.
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  • 6/14/2017 11:19:15 PM
    So many things are almost happening but not quite. I don't even know what to be most hopeful or concerned about. I expect Taree to come through with the win, though. Always Taree.
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    • Ryan Watt It's definitely a lot of set up here, to be sure. But necessary. Taree's idea is good, but will it actually help?
      6/14/2017 11:26:38 PM
    • Jennifer Flath Of course it will! Don't pretend like Taree doesn't win all the things.
      6/15/2017 4:37:24 AM
  • 6/14/2017 11:28:51 PM
    It's fun when you know a character well enough to see him not acting like himself when everyone even he doesn't know he's not acting like himself. That was a lot of ... Show More
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    • Ryan Watt At the same time that Torias was clearly not acting normal, well, he does have a history of making really bad decisions when it comes to thefts.
      6/15/2017 4:22:34 AM
  • 6/7/2017 11:49:52 PM
    That dwarf is pretty great. It's been a while since Torias was part of a heist. I think. Right? Either way, I'm looking forward to getting answers for poor Victor.
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    • Ryan Watt Oooh, it has been a while, hasn't it? How exciting.
      6/8/2017 3:38:11 AM
  • 5/31/2017 11:25:59 PM
    I'm glad Valdas found a purpose as a pack mule. Hehe. Is targeting a mythical being within the scope of what the guild does? Normally taking down the bad guy is ... Show More
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    • Ryan Watt Beings like the Buzzard King are something Champions have and do kill. I mean, Cyril had no problem fighting the sea serpent, until he learned it was a human girl, then he had problems killing it. This one he knows is a devil so he is okay with trying to stop it, although killing it he isn't sure he wants to do.
      6/1/2017 4:51:46 AM
  • J.A. Waters commented on Chapter 169 :
    5/22/2017 2:35:48 PM
    Yikes, that's a rather chaotic battle. Everyone seems to have their own idea on how to beat the Buzzard King and nobody seems to want to work together except the Guild of ... Show More
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    • Ryan Watt Sometimes battles are really easy to write, sometimes not. This was one of the more challenging ones. Especially with how to explain how (in the original fairy tale) a parrot kills the condor by diving down its mouth. Fairy tales are weird man, ya know?
      5/22/2017 3:53:22 PM
    • Jennifer Flath Ha, I was going to say it was really fun to watch everybody figure out how to work together so well at crunch time. They all seemed to play off each other and keep the buzzard king off guard. Except Valdas. Who knows what that guy was up to? Kanika really is the worst, though. I agree there.
      5/31/2017 11:18:18 PM
  • 5/16/2017 8:19:14 PM
    The buzzard king should try dating within his species...whatever that is. Or maybe he could read a book on humans and their special dietary needs. More importantly I ... Show More
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    • Ryan Watt No spoiler, but to do as you said would be a little bit incestuous. Poor Valdas.
      5/16/2017 8:43:22 PM
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