• Jennifer Flath
    • WA, US
    • Joined in February 2014
  • I'm just a person who'd like to be a writer and a Princess, obviously, with magical powers, preferably.
  • 4/26/2017 11:34:16 PM
    So...close... And now I Waite. Again. I love how that salt thing turned out for her. It's like the anti-fairy tale ending. I hope Nadzaya factors in again later.
    (10 chapter reviews) | 3805 +Votes
    Once Upon A Time... kingdoms in trouble had to wait for a wandering hero to come along and save the day. But why wait? ... More Info
    • Ryan Watt I've seen so many fairy tales where the same salt thing is used, and I grew so tired of it, I decided to turn it on its head a little!
      4/26/2017 11:55:38 PM
  • 4/21/2017 3:38:35 AM
    Hmm... That's about all I've got right now. A lot of "hmm." I'm half wondering if the geese are the brothers, but that just doesn't quite make sense. It took me so long ... Show More
    (10 chapter reviews) | 3805 +Votes
    Once Upon A Time... kingdoms in trouble had to wait for a wandering hero to come along and save the day. But why wait? ... More Info
    • Ryan Watt Well, only three days to go, right? Not too bad. Right? Hmmm?
      4/21/2017 2:03:28 PM
  • 4/21/2017 2:53:24 AM
    Dum dum dummm. Cool build-up through this chapter. It's so exciting to get so much of her past all at once. Hooray! Also, the nice witch continues to be delightful.
    (10 chapter reviews) | 3805 +Votes
    Once Upon A Time... kingdoms in trouble had to wait for a wandering hero to come along and save the day. But why wait? ... More Info
    • Ryan Watt What can I say? I figured it was time to give at least a little of her backstory. It is Vol 3 afterall.
      4/21/2017 3:16:37 AM
  • 4/13/2017 10:29:34 PM
    Oh, awesome. The end bit and the part where Torias and Satu both have secrets that catch up to them at the same moment were just great. I'm glad this story's witch wasn't ... Show More
    (10 chapter reviews) | 3805 +Votes
    Once Upon A Time... kingdoms in trouble had to wait for a wandering hero to come along and save the day. But why wait? ... More Info
    • Ryan Watt Oh cool! You're starting this arc finally! Excited to get some thoughts on it. Yeah, not very witchy yet, right? Hmm. But then again, what kind of story would it be if the old witch was helpful and misunderstood?
      4/14/2017 2:44:56 AM
    • Jennifer Flath Well, being friends with the super bad witch is probably not a great sign, but heckling nobility is pretty understandable. I'm so sad to be behind on this arc in particular! I keep thinking I'm going to catch up and then...randomness happens. Soon I'll master the power of freezing time and I'll catch up on all the things.
      4/19/2017 1:14:05 AM
  • Jennifer Flath commented on Chapter 25 :
    1/31/2017 9:09:24 PM
    Is Ali really inflicting mental damage, though, or is he just Sean's scapegoat?
    588 +Votes
    Complete as of April 20th 2017. Sean considers himself a pretty normal guy. His biggest problems include making ends ... More Info
    • M. Howalt Who knows? (I do. ;))
      4/5/2017 7:52:13 PM
  • Jennifer Flath commented on Chapter 24 :
    1/31/2017 9:05:12 PM
    Forgetting is one thing, but there's this whole level of events rewriting themselves that's just eerie. Nothing quite adds up. It's interesting that he's trying so hard ... Show More
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    Complete as of April 20th 2017. Sean considers himself a pretty normal guy. His biggest problems include making ends ... More Info
    • M. Howalt Eerie is a perfect word for it. I promise everything does add up, though. If you have the right equation. ;) Thanks a lot!
      4/5/2017 7:48:24 PM
  • Jennifer Flath commented on Chapter 23 :
    1/31/2017 8:58:31 PM
    Not picking the black notebook is so something I would do.
    588 +Votes
    Complete as of April 20th 2017. Sean considers himself a pretty normal guy. His biggest problems include making ends ... More Info
    • M. Howalt Haha! I bet Sean's glad he's not the only one.
      4/5/2017 7:47:28 PM
  • Jennifer Flath commented on Chapter 22 :
    1/31/2017 8:47:39 PM
    Argh, Matthew must know more than he's letting on...Or is he just seeing signs Sean isn't sharing with us...
    588 +Votes
    Complete as of April 20th 2017. Sean considers himself a pretty normal guy. His biggest problems include making ends ... More Info
    • M. Howalt My mouth is sealed. ;)
      4/5/2017 7:47:06 PM
  • Jennifer Flath commented on Chapter 21 :
    1/31/2017 8:42:42 PM
    So much oddness! That is all for now, because I'm doing a scramble to catch up on things today. Maybe I'll have this story solved in a few chapters. ;-)
    588 +Votes
    Complete as of April 20th 2017. Sean considers himself a pretty normal guy. His biggest problems include making ends ... More Info
    • M. Howalt Thanks a bunch for reading! I'm horribly slow at replying to comments, but I'm really appreciating them! :)
      4/5/2017 7:46:50 PM
  • Ryan Watt commented on Chapter 73 :
    3/29/2017 9:10:09 PM
    Hurray! I finally carved out time to read all of this. Boy, Shrilynda has some sort of potent magical concussion. This certainly makes her more dangerous. Not quite a ... Show More
    740 +Votes
    Ten years have passed since the events of The Black Pearl and The Memory Spell. Rosaliy is now a Sorceress at Crystal ... More Info
    • Jennifer Flath Hooray! Thanks so much for reading! She will be so dangerous soon. Right now, my plan for book 4 is a time hop to when the kids are a bit older and she's ready to cause some real trouble, but we'll see what happens when I get there. About the past hints, phew, that was tough. I felt out of my depth with Shril, because she knows so much more about the history of this world than I do. Good thing her brain wasn't in full working order.
      3/30/2017 2:36:08 AM
    • Ryan Watt I remember you saying Shril knows more than you. I thought of that every time she mentions something historical. Which is why I wanted to mention how much I liked it!
      3/30/2017 4:58:03 AM
    • Jennifer Flath I was actually surprised by Rin's appearance in this story, so I wasn't expecting any of that past to come up. I was so excited to get a little bit of little Rin in there.
      3/30/2017 6:13:46 PM
    • Jennifer Flath (I thought the main showdown was going to be something along the lines of Esmona trying to double cross Shrilynda, but Shrilynda found that laughable. My villains are so story-controlling.)
      3/30/2017 6:17:32 PM
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