• Jennifer Flath
    • WA, US
    • Joined in February 2014
  • I'm just a person who'd like to be a writer and a Princess, obviously, with magical powers, preferably.
  • Jennifer Flath commented on Chapter 37 :
    7/19/2017 5:38:20 AM
    This is going downhill fast.
    (2 chapter reviews) | 859 +Votes
    Once upon a time a soldier walked away from a war, and he never stopped walking. As the decades past, stories formed ... More Info
    • Ryan Watt Well, I gave the Soldier about nine good months, so there's that, right?
      7/19/2017 6:10:43 AM
  • Jennifer Flath commented on Chapter 36 :
    7/19/2017 5:30:30 AM
    Very clever, but since everybody already knew the guy was cheating, I'm not sure how much the Soldier accomplished. I very much enjoyed the drama of the fixed card game, though.
    (2 chapter reviews) | 859 +Votes
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    • Ryan Watt Isn't that true of a lot of vengeance? That it does not really do anything?
      7/19/2017 6:07:02 AM
  • Jennifer Flath commented on Chapter 35 :
    7/19/2017 5:22:40 AM
    Aw, man, you knew better, Soldier!
    (2 chapter reviews) | 859 +Votes
    Once upon a time a soldier walked away from a war, and he never stopped walking. As the decades past, stories formed ... More Info
    • Ryan Watt But, but, but, male bonding! Socialness. Not being alone.
      7/19/2017 6:06:18 AM
  • Jennifer Flath commented on Chapter 34 :
    7/19/2017 5:13:54 AM
    I forgot I was in the middle of this story until you started the new one! Ack! Trust me, it says more about me and the state of this year than about my buddy, Soldier. ... Show More
    (2 chapter reviews) | 859 +Votes
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    • Ryan Watt Oh man, I had forgotten the loaven daggers bit until you commented. Where did I come up with that phrase?
      7/19/2017 6:04:47 AM
  • 7/19/2017 4:52:16 AM
    I tend to get lost in epic battles or drift off, but this one stayed really personal in its epicness. So many people got cool moments. I'm not sure whose was my favorite. ... Show More
    (11 chapter reviews) | 4070 +Votes
    Once Upon A Time... kingdoms in trouble had to wait for a wandering hero to come along and save the day. But why wait? ... More Info
    • Ryan Watt Oooh, look at you all caught up. Thanks for reading. - I had almost forgotten about giving one of the characters their moments. It was important to ground the battle in each person's struggle. -- And I may need to really rethink how to make Eostre less threatening in the future.
      7/19/2017 5:02:39 AM
  • 7/12/2017 11:43:46 PM
    That Buzzard King is just the worst. But it is fun to have a setting where so much pure magic is possible. I'm all about how much time the guild has spent in fae kingdoms lately.
    (11 chapter reviews) | 4070 +Votes
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    • Ryan Watt I knew they were going to spend a while there, but I didn't realize quite how much! Phew. Thankfully the volume is almost over.
      7/12/2017 11:56:04 PM
  • 7/12/2017 11:31:40 PM
    That wife was a pretty amazing addition to the tense situation. Somehow she made things more horrible and darkly hilarious at the same time.
    (11 chapter reviews) | 4070 +Votes
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    • Ryan Watt Hah! Glad you like her. She came out of my want to have different perspectives for women than fairy tales usually have. She isn't a victim here at all.
      7/12/2017 11:37:04 PM
  • 6/28/2017 11:34:27 PM
    Oh, oh, did the mom die a long time ago, and she's just a projection of the Griffon? Or maybe the doctor is? I still want a griffon. Mine would be clever and adorable and not try to kill me.
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    • Ryan Watt Good idea, but the power to create illusions is tied to the Griffon King title, which Ol Rascal doesn't have... yet.
      6/29/2017 3:24:15 AM
  • 6/28/2017 11:27:00 PM
    I need a griffon. I would ride it around and it would love me and guard my house. It would conjure fake people to talk to salespeople at the door so I don't have to deal ... Show More
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    Once Upon A Time... kingdoms in trouble had to wait for a wandering hero to come along and save the day. But why wait? ... More Info
    • Ryan Watt Sadly, not too many kind helpful griffons in this world, which is a shame cause you're right, they're totally awesome! As for Viktor, he was raised as a tool, long term thinking isn't really in his wheelhouse. Kind of like someone else on the team we know...
      6/29/2017 3:22:31 AM
  • 6/28/2017 11:35:25 PM
    Basically he would be Clifford, but cuter, and with handy magical powers.
    (11 chapter reviews) | 4070 +Votes
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