• C. Rye
    • CA, US
    • Joined in December 2013
  • As an author, I'm thrilled to have been accepted for publication by Drunk Monkeys, and I encourage everyone to read their site. Drunk Monkeys is quirky, deep and features ... Show More
  • 6/3/2016 6:34:13 AM
    Hello, I have participated in JukePop in the past as an author. I have an eleven year old daughter who has started her own novel. Can she participate via my JukePop ... Show More
    • 1888 We recommend creating a separate account. Please read the Terms and Conditions for the Summer Writing Project as well - 1888.center/terms-and-conditions
      6/3/2016 11:20:14 PM
  • 11/29/2014 11:46:49 PM
    Thanks so much for the encouragement! I'm busy at work on the sequel but don't feel it is quite ready for prime time. I will certainly submit to JP when it is in better ... Show More
  • C. Rye wants more of Ready Or Not
    9/8/2014 7:23:18 AM
    56 +Votes
    Micah has been homeless for a over year, by choice. Marketing herself as a temporary artist in residence has allowed her ... More Info
    Genres:
    Chick Lit
  • C. Rye commented on Chapter 8 :
    6/23/2014 6:32:50 AM
    I like the banter between Micah and Kerrie--very natural-- and also the fact that Micah tries to reassure Kerrie about Kerrie's desire to keep her personal business ... Show More
    56 +Votes
    Micah has been homeless for a over year, by choice. Marketing herself as a temporary artist in residence has allowed her ... More Info
    Genres:
    Chick Lit
    • Janel Gradowski Sorry to take so long to reply (crazy summer!). Thank you and thanks for taking the time to comment.
      9/4/2014 8:00:32 PM
  • C. Rye commented on Chapter 1 :
    7/3/2014 7:08:37 AM
    Strong opening--I was immediately taken in. I wanted to know how the narrator ended up in someone else's room, clothes, etc. The setting is very scary. I like the mixture ... Show More
    47 +Votes
    Genres:
    Adventure
    • S Wow, thank you so much for your comment! I'm glad to hear that the themes I attempted to integrate into the story are showing throughout the chapter. I hope you'll keep reading.
      7/3/2014 3:54:24 PM
  • C. Rye commented on Chapter 2 :
    6/23/2014 6:21:04 AM
    I like the narrator's interaction with her mother and the contrast between sisters. I particularly like Em's imagining of how her mother might view Peter. The ... Show More
    41 +Votes
    What do you do when a road trip goes bad? As in, really, really bad? The plan was simple -- take Peter's new holographic ... More Info
    • Leigh Kimmel Thanks. I hope you'll keep reading. I just put Chapter 9 up.
      6/28/2014 1:47:50 AM
  • C. Rye has just added Chapter 22 to Sibling Moons
    6/27/2014 6:01:36 AM
    680 +Votes
    “What do you have to lose? The leader of your insurrection is dead and its stronghold destroyed. It’s over,” he says, ... More Info
  • C. Rye commented on Chapter 9 :
    6/23/2014 6:44:46 AM
    I love the idea of this artist colony. It reminds me of LA's Brewery, an eclectic artist community that hosts a bi-annual art walk. I like the fact that we see the ... Show More
    56 +Votes
    Micah has been homeless for a over year, by choice. Marketing herself as a temporary artist in residence has allowed her ... More Info
    Genres:
    Chick Lit
  • Leigh Kimmel commented on Chapter 20 :
    6/23/2014 1:05:19 AM
    You might want to double-check the formatting on the last several paragraphs. They're showing on my monitor as an unbroken wall of text.
    680 +Votes
    “What do you have to lose? The leader of your insurrection is dead and its stronghold destroyed. It’s over,” he says, ... More Info
    • C. Rye Hello Leigh, Thanks for the heads-up. Can I ask what browser you are using? Or maybe you are reading with JukePop's app? I'm not seeing similar behavior on my end. I've checked TenFourFox & Safari, as well as Chrome & Explorer on desktop machines. Hmmm I did save a draft a few days ago without any paragraph returns, but I had not "published" that draft. I wonder if that got out? Thanks again!
      6/23/2014 5:15:51 AM
    • Jerry Fan I see the last sentence could use a line inserted above it.
      6/23/2014 5:23:33 AM
    • C. Rye Hello Jerry, thanks for pointing that one out! I'll correct it soon when I put up the next chapter--I try to make corrections with new chapters so folks just get the email update once. But thank you again!
      6/23/2014 5:42:51 AM
    • Leigh Kimmel I'm using Firefox on MacOS. I don't know if that makes any difference in how paragraphing displays, but it might be significant.
      6/23/2014 6:37:04 AM
  • C. Rye commented on Chapter 1 :
    6/23/2014 6:02:02 AM
    I love the "Catch 22" example with the guitar. Witty! Also, fun narrator and nice contrast between characters. I really like the fact that you pair a "music rebel" with a ... Show More
    41 +Votes
    What do you do when a road trip goes bad? As in, really, really bad? The plan was simple -- take Peter's new holographic ... More Info