• L. A. Torchia
    • AB, CA
    • Joined in November 2013
  • Lover of the written word. Thinker outside of everything-no box required. What I get by achieving my goals is not as important as who I become.
  • 5/28/2017 4:34:07 PM
    i am miss yashita ghazi i have a proposal for you via at (yashitaghazi11@gmail.com)
  • Diane Bryan commented on Chapter 13 :
    6/6/2016 8:52:35 PM
    I keep seeing specific actors in the various roles. You portray the very visually,which works great for me. You have a nice smooth writing style.
    (2 chapter reviews) | 769 +Votes
    Twelve year old Jorgi vanishes one morning on her way to school. Four months later she reappears at an Edmonton police ... More Info
    • L. A. Torchia Thank you. As you know it takes a lot of work but very satisfying. Hope to get better.
      6/6/2016 9:07:00 PM
  • Diane Bryan commented on Chapter 8 :
    6/6/2016 7:10:40 PM
    This story feels reall true. I appreciate how your characterization of Ida is so vulnerable. There is a tech problem with chapter 7. I had to jump to 8and then go backwards to read 7.
    (2 chapter reviews) | 769 +Votes
    Twelve year old Jorgi vanishes one morning on her way to school. Four months later she reappears at an Edmonton police ... More Info
    • L. A. Torchia Thank you for letting me know about that and for the reviews.
      6/6/2016 9:05:06 PM
  • L. A. Torchia commented on Chapter 1 :
    2/3/2014 11:12:47 PM
    Very interesting. Flowing.
    (16 chapter reviews) | 124 +Votes
    Long ago the city of Bennu was ruled by the Rift Masters; humans who were able to manipulate a mysterious energy called ... More Info
    • ANN brown Hello good day, i will like to meet you in person, am miss Anna, am from France and am leaving in London, please contact me on my email id at (annh1brown@hotmail.com), for more information about me. because i have some important thing i will like to discuss with you privately. Hope to hear from you soon. Anna, thanks
      5/6/2016 12:53:18 AM
  • 3/22/2016 9:47:55 PM
    Hello good day, i will like to meet you in person, am miss Anna, am form France and am leaving in London, please contact me on my email id at (annh1brown@hotmail.com), ... Show More
  • 8/6/2014 4:38:55 AM
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    Twelve year old Jorgi vanishes one morning on her way to school. Four months later she reappears at an Edmonton police ... More Info
  • 5/22/2014 12:29:45 AM
    So glad I got caught up! This is getting intense! Can't wait to see what happens next!
    (2 chapter reviews) | 769 +Votes
    Twelve year old Jorgi vanishes one morning on her way to school. Four months later she reappears at an Edmonton police ... More Info
    • L. A. Torchia Thanks! I'm going to have the next chapter out by the end of the weekend.
      8/2/2014 7:46:47 PM
  • L. A. Torchia commented on Chapter 1 :
    3/15/2014 6:27:45 AM
    I will read a few more chapters when you put them out and then give my comments. The story could prove to be wonderful or boring.
    46 +Votes
    Once upon a time, in a kingdom not too far away, but further away than you might think, there lived a young girl whose ... More Info
    • Scott A. Chiasson-Faulkner Deat Torchcia - I like what you wrote, lass, so it appears I should post a few more chapters, giving you the chance to tell me if my YA fairy-tale is either truly wonderful, or indescribably boring (smiling). I look forward to hearing your decision and I look forward to reading your serial.
      3/15/2014 8:16:25 PM
    • L. A. Torchia Do post more chapters. You have an interesting writing style.
      3/15/2014 8:49:52 PM
    • Scott A. Chiasson-Faulkner Chapter 2 posted, Miss Torchia. I look forward to reading your comments,
      3/16/2014 11:54:56 AM
    • Scott A. Chiasson-Faulkner Ch. 2 posted, and Ch. 3 coming shortly. Thank you for your kind comment.
      3/24/2014 3:12:44 PM
    • Scott A. Chiasson-Faulkner Try Ch. 3, lass.
      7/25/2014 1:40:49 AM
  • S Vest commented on Chapter 0 :
    6/19/2014 3:37:27 AM
    Your title intrigued me. There's a lot going on here. I'll definitely keep reading.
    (2 chapter reviews) | 769 +Votes
    Twelve year old Jorgi vanishes one morning on her way to school. Four months later she reappears at an Edmonton police ... More Info
  • 6/11/2014 2:52:02 AM
    (2 chapter reviews) | 769 +Votes
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