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  • anna brown commented on :
    3/31/2016 1:33:24 AM
    Hello good day, i will like to meet you in person, am miss Anna, am from France and am leaving in London, please contact me on my email id at (annh1brown@hotmail.com), ... Show More
  • Nic Eaton commented on :
    9/21/2015 5:17:35 PM
    Grippong so far! I like that it jumps right in without much exposition and unveils the setting throughout. I was also pleasantly surprised at the idea of the existence of ... Show More
  • Brian Hurrel commented on :
    7/25/2015 1:21:10 PM
    I'm intrigued. Lots of potential and a good start. I'm curious as to how long it's been since the ship launched.
    • Patrick Downing Nice universe building. Raises a lot of questions that gets me wanting to read on. Good work.
      8/21/2015 10:20:48 PM
  • Geoffrey Ng commented on :
    8/4/2015 12:34:09 PM
    I really like your prose. Your setting was really well defined. I'm interested to find out more about this Academy.
  • Ryan Watt commented on :
    7/29/2015 1:00:41 AM
    This is one of those core ideas that I read and think "Oh why didn't I think of that!" I love the idea that they have to excavate their own ship to figure out what it is ... Show More
  • Ada Redmond commented on :
    7/27/2015 5:36:12 PM
    What a brilliant start! The premise really grabbed me, it reminds me a little of Stargate Universe. I like the idea of the exploration of a giant vessel, though of course ... Show More